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學(xué)生姓名:R同學(xué)
錄取結(jié)果：
US News 2015 Liberal Arts Colleges # 1 威廉姆斯學(xué)院
US News 2015 National Universities # 15 康奈爾大學(xué)
畢業(yè)學(xué)校:International School in Shanghai
GPA: 3.6
TOEFL: N/A
ACT:32
SAT II SAT 科目考試:MATH II 770
AP:Chinese language and culture:5
Activities 課外活動: Track and field Sprinting Group Leader-Upcoming Captain 田徑短跑組組長，即將晉升為隊長
BetterChina100k, Founder & President 創(chuàng)始人與主席
AMIS Honors Choir? AMIS榮譽合唱團
Tennis Doubles/Mixs Doubles 1 - Champion 雙人網(wǎng)球、混合雙打-冠軍
Basketball Freshman Captain - JV & Varsity Member 新生籃球隊隊長-校隊成員
AMIS Jazz Choir??? AMIS爵士合唱團
Worship Team Leader
Amazing Grace Shelter, Volunteer
Fullbridge Business Program, Fullbridgian賦橋商業(yè)領(lǐng)導(dǎo)力項目
UnderArmour Ambassador
Personal Statement 個人陳述: R focused on his dedication and commitment to track. R described a specific race to show the level of professionalism and training he gave to the sport throughout his high school career. Using this to speak about his discipline and passion in general, R portrayed a well-rounded profile.
R同學(xué)將他的重點都放在田徑上面。他通過描述一次特殊的競賽向大家展示了他的專業(yè)度及整個高中生涯為這項運動所付出的努力。通過談?wù)撟约旱募o律性及熱情，R同學(xué)向大家展示了一個全面發(fā)展的自己。
Counselor’s comments 顧問評語: R had the biggest heart of any student we’ve worked with. His care for and interest in those around him shone through the big smile and warm greetings he showered on any he met. Allowing this heart and genuine interest in his friends, family and community to shine through in his essays and applications is what we focused on achieving. R often allowed the stress of school, parental expectations, or personal goals cloud the joy and enthusiasm he so naturally possessed. Coaching him to adopt better study habits, implement time management skills and embrace his strengths set the stage for painting this portrait in his applications. He further recognized and embraced these strengths through the development and execution of his business project, BetterChina100k, in which he raised over 200,000RMB to fund start-up companies focused on social entrepreneurship in China. His smile was never bigger nor brighter than when he received his acceptance letter from Cornell, which he had feared would elude him due to inconsistencies in grades and lower than hoped test scores. R thanked us again and again for believing in him and thereby challenging him to believe in himself.
R同學(xué)是目前我遇到的少有的胸懷寬廣的人。透過他燦爛的笑容和熱情周到的問候， 我們能感受到他對周圍人的關(guān)注與關(guān)心。真誠待人，關(guān)心他人，體現(xiàn)在他的申請材料中的對家庭和社區(qū)的關(guān)注正是我們一直致力于達成的目標。R天生樂觀積極，但有時候迫于學(xué)業(yè)的壓力、家人過高的期待、 以及自身的期許，R的心情和熱情難免受到打擊。通過學(xué)習(xí)新的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣，掌握時間管理技巧并且利用自身優(yōu)勢， R在申請文書中刻畫了一個完整和優(yōu)秀的自己。通過策劃和執(zhí)行BetterChina100k這個項目，R進一步了解和運用了上面所學(xué)的知識，并最終募集到了20萬人民幣，用于支持中國那些具有創(chuàng)業(yè)精神剛剛起步的公司。R曾擔心學(xué)業(yè)成績的起伏和沒有達到自己期待水平的標準化考試成績影響到Cornell的錄取, 所以當收到Cornell的錄取通知時，R 高興的無以言表。 R再三感謝我們給予他的信任和督促，促使他不斷進步。
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