【導讀】英倫小紳士教你如何征服霍奇基斯
學生情況
姓名:R同學
TOEFL: 免考
SSAT:92%
就讀學校:英國圣愛德華茲中學
在校平均分GPA:4.0/4.0
課外活動亮點總結(jié):英式橄欖球、社區(qū)服務(wù)活動
最終錄取結(jié)果:
排名第8—Hotchkiss School霍奇基斯中學
外教專家點評:
After a few rounds of conversations, the first impression Student R left on me was the mischievous twinkle in his eyes that tipped me off to his wit and humor even before our first meeting. The second impression was his incredibly direct and dry responses to boarding school prompts. As we brainstormed what he liked about Hotchkiss or noticed during his trip, I still remember his awed response that he could not believe that students wore flip-flops. Coming from an extremely formal and stayed British boarding school where sports jackets, khakis, ties, loafers and bowlers formed the expected attire, Student R was flabbergasted by the seeming nonchalance and informality of US boarding schools. We used this observation as the starting point for his ‘why Hotchkiss’ essay as he spoke about the type of community this embodied and why he wanted to join it. These small victories made the thrill of his acceptance to Hotchkiss all the more exciting.
(譯文)在和R同學面談幾次后,有兩件事給我印象深刻。第一是他有些調(diào)皮的眼神,透著一種機智和幽默。第二則是他對于學校文書題目生硬且過于直白的回答,經(jīng)常讓我們?nèi)炭〔唤?。在頭腦風暴的過程中,當我們問他為什么想要加入霍奇基斯,對這所學校有什么印象時,他回答說當他參觀霍奇基斯的校園時,對于學生們隨意的穿著感到十分震驚。在英國讀書的他根本無法想象學生們穿著人字拖走來走去—在英國,西服、襯衫、領(lǐng)帶才是學生應(yīng)該有的穿著。然而,這也使他開始思考美國寄宿高中的學術(shù)風格—尊重學生的意愿,并且賦予學生足夠的自由去追尋自己的興趣。最后,我們一致決定將他對于英國和美國兩種截然不同的文化的對比和反思作為文書的切入點,闡述他想要加入霍奇基斯,開啟一段新的探索之旅的強烈愿望。當收到霍奇基斯的錄取信時,我們相信這所全美頂級的寄宿高中也一定喜歡上了這個擁有獨特視角的英倫小紳士。
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